Saturday, June 20, 2015

Q&A Saturday 6-20-15



Its Q&A Saturday, and that means I get to answer a question from one of you, my dear readers. Today’s question comes from Sheri, “What is the most challenging thing about writing for you?”

Another good question!

Wow, the most challenging? Right now, its editing. I want to be able to snap my fingers and find it done. Unfortunately, it just doesn’t happen that way. I’ve also learned a great deal since I first wrote my first novel, Earth’s Light. So that means I’m not just editing, but also expanding.

I’m also able to recognize, now, how often I use certain words and verbs. While that could be called my style, I tend to agree with my abolished friends - its a crutch and repetitive. Unfortunately, it took me until the beginning of this month to learn how to search and highlight words. (I never claimed to be fully tech savvy!) However, now that I know this, I’m able to edit a little quicker.

Well, that’s today’s question! Comment below with your own questions, and maybe next week I’ll answer it! If I get enough questions, I’ll start answering more each week. So hurry, comment below! And as always, be kind and share.

Friday, June 19, 2015

Friday Features 6-19-15


Since I have not gotten much response out of my application, each Friday I will simply share my personal favorite sites until I get more of a response from my application. No worries, stuff happens and I’m pretty flexible. So, without further ado, let me show off the best I have on the web!


Facebook online parties:

https://www.facebook.com/events/678196842325113/
 Saturday, June 27th, from 4pm to 10pm EDT Sheri Velarde and Rhiannon Wellman will be celebrating their new releases! The event will be chock full of authors, fun and games. I also hear a certain feline-like blogger will be taking over for an hour... *meow!* Click the pic to take you there!



https://www.facebook.com/events/1619466994938663/     There's that feline-like blogger again! Apparently she's turning 25+12 on July 21st, and she thinks this merits some kind of party. The nerve! LOL The party is filling up fast, so be quick to grab a spot. Spots are open for authors, bloggers, crafters, cover artists, editors, and more! I'm also looking for anyone willing to donate for prizes. Click the pic to take you there!







Facebook Author Pages:

K Perrin (I wonder who this chick is? How’d she make the list?)

Assorted other Facebook pages:

Blogs and websites you should be reading:


Kid-friendly blogs and websites

Wattpad pages:

Go Fund Me:

A friend of mine needs help. A small donation of $5 is a bigger help than you'll ever know. http://www.gofundme.com/wxxmm8

Twitter:


Readwave:

Thursday, June 18, 2015

Inspirational Art Thursday - 6-18-15

Every Thursday is Inspirational Art Thursday. I offer up four pictures to help stimulate the muse within. But that’s not the best part…

What I want, from you, is to write three or four sentences in the comments. Nothing big, and don’t worry about grammar. The idea isn’t perfection, its a start of a story. Each week that I get comments, I’ll pick one at random and share it with the following week’s post. See, easy right?

Today’s theme is… JEWELS!







 There you go! Now, write me 3 or 4 sentences on one of those pictures. You can do it!



Wednesday, June 17, 2015

Wednesday Review: A Flawed Jewel by Dawn Brower

I won this from an event I attended, and was so very happy to receive it! Dawn Brower has a unique writing flair, one that draws you in and holds you until the story is done. Wait, the story is done? But… Aha! There’s more to the series. Whew. Wait, more? I must get these!

My Review:

Dawn Brower weaves a tale of a lady and a pirate in A Flawed Jewel. You start as the Lady Pia boards a ship bound for France and her grandfather’s estate. You follow her journey as she is kidnapped and falls for the handsome Thor, the pirate determined to make her grandfather pay for wrongs done.

Romance has these wonderfully predictable plot points, and Dawn Brower covers many of them in this offering. A beautiful maid, and handsome rogue, odd circumstances, and a happily ever after. The reader is indeed pulled into the plot, and the character building is there.

What bugs me, in this day and age, is the continuous use of kidnapping by authors. The maid always falls for her kidnapper, and he for her. Because its romantic, right? It really shouldn’t be, and the use of this, even in today’s society, irks me to no end. Kidnapping is serious business, and I truly wish it would be made as serious in novels, rather than the romantic fantasies so many fall into. Stockholm syndrome is real, and should not be pushed off as something to be ignored.

However, for my rating, I am ignoring the kidnapping and focusing on the story as a whole. I was indeed surprised at the end, which made me smile. I like having emotions as I read. There are some sections where I am sure a word should have been added in, or a sentence that was cut off too soon. All in all, I give this four out of five stars. I do look forward to reading more of the series.

I recommend this to anyone looking for a fairly typical historical romance, especially romances featuring pirates. Thor is definitely going to be visiting me tonight in my dreams!

Blogger’s Notes:

Dawn Brower did exceed my expectations, in spite of using the kidnapping. She did make it work for the story, and I am genuinely excited to read the next in the series. If you are going to be offended by the kidnapping thing, stay away, otherwise join this fab artist as she weaves her tale around your dreams.

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Tuesday, June 16, 2015

Takeover Tuesday 6-16-15 Kelly Blanchard #3

Timeline Outline


When writing historical fiction work, it’s important to have an outline—a timeline to be more precise. This allows you to keep track of actual dates and events without having to dig through piles of books. This is also useful when you have a specific, complex story possibly with multiple sub-stories.

What is the difference between a normal outline and a timeline outline? The normal outline is vertical dealing mainly with the progression of the story, chapter-by-chapter, scene-by-scene. The timeline outline, however, is horizontal, showing mainly the relationships between specific events and character in a specific range of time. You can also see, in a snapshot, other events that occurred at the same time but with different characters.

How do you create a timeline outline? Well, you can do it by hand, but you’ll need continuous printer paper because timelines can be very long due to their horizontal nature. Or you can use an Excel program. Or you can use an actual timeline program on your computer. I have done it by hand as well as with a timeline program. Unfortunately, I can’t show you what it looks like when done by hand because the computer can’t scan continuous printer paper. However, here is a screenshot of what it looks like on the computer—at least one part of it. This is from my historical fiction novels, The Last King of Legend series, research I did for Book 2, ‘In the Face of Trials’, so there are no spoilers unless you haven’t read the books—in which cause I can’t really help you, but this IS history, so technically it’s still not spoilers.
 

This is Aeon Timeline. If you did NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) or Camp NaNoWriMo, and if you won, you obtained a discount for this program for a limited period of time. It’s incredibly easy to use. Let’s break it down.

There are multiple timeline templates you can use for your story. This specific one is BC – AD because I have historical dates to use. When I am outlining my fantasy novel though, I tend to just use ‘Years Only,” create a year, and go from there.

At the top you see the months and years. It has the ability to go to specific days, but I didn’t use that too much since I didn’t know the exact dates most of the time. In the middle with the little red dots and red vertical lines, the dots are the date of the event with a brief description of the event beside the dot. The line then goes down and hits horizontal lines. Those horizontal lines are the lifetime of characters (in this case ‘King Baldwin IV, Princess Isabella, and Baldwin V).

Now, if you look along the blue line of King Baldwin IV’s life, you see blue circles–circles that are full and hollow. The full circles mean Baldwin participated in that specific event, and the number beside the circle is how old he was when it happened. You’d have to turn on ‘Toggle Age Display’ to get that to turn up, but it’s a marvelous tool to have. Now, the hollow circles are events of which Baldwin was present but merely observed. For instance, he only witnessed Sibylla’s marriage to William Longsword whereas he participated in the Battle of Montgisard.

There are two other symbols you will see along the characters timeline. First one is a star. You see this on Baldwin V’s timeline in that picture. That represents his birth. The next symbol you will see is a block, and that represents the character’s death. It’s very handy.


Now, here is a glimpse of the timeline outline from my fantasy universe. This isn’t just one story but rather three different stories happening at the same time, but they’re all in the same world. It was getting confusing in my head, so I made this timeline to understand what happened first, who was how old when what happened, and who was where when that happened.

As you can see, this is a little more complex and compacted. There are more characters and more events than what you see in that snapshot, but it gives you an idea of how something like this might turn out.

“But Kelly, I don’t have Aeon Timeline. What am I supposed to do then?” I am sure there are other programs available to you, but I haven’t researched them. Otherwise, you can mimic this idea on a spreadsheet or by hand on paper.

When I wrote my timeline by hand, I had two characters’ lifespans I wanted to record for sure–King Baldwin IV and Baldwin V. My historical fiction novels ‘The Last King of Legends’ is based on the life of King Baldwin IV, so I had his lifeline go the length of the paper, and below that, I made vertical columns–each column a specific year from 1161-1185 because that was the length of Baldwin IV’s life. Now, Baldwin V was born during Baldwin IV’s life, and because of his importance, I wanted to include his lifespan so I could calculate his age at specific times. I put his lifeline directly above Baldwin IV’s. It looked something like this. I made this as a spreadsheet, and I’m starting at year 1174 due to limitations of space here. Also I didn’t fill in ALL the details of the years. Otherwise that would be spoilers for the books!



Now, of course there could more space between each year (sometimes as wide as a small paragraph). In each column, I wrote the events that happened in that year, and so on and so forth. This way I could just glimpse at the timeline and see which year was the busiest or the slowest. I could also look at it quickly and remember I had to set up for this specific event.

Does every story require a timeline outline? No. Must every author create a timeline for their stories? No. All of this is merely a suggestion for organization when writing something complex. And I have to admit, it is a lot of fun creating timelines (especially on the computer), so if you’re looking for another way to procrastinate while technically working on your story, there you have it. No, I’m not promoting procrastination–just always try to remember to procrastinate later.

For now, you have a fair idea of how timeline outlines might be beneficial to you. Now, with the next several posts, we will focus on the pros and cons of outlines–to use or not to use or just throw away the outline you had. That is what we will discuss.

**This was originally posted on June 26, 2014 at: https://cinemagraphicwriting.wordpress.com/2014/06/26/timeline-outline/
Many, many thanks to author Kelly Blanchard for allowing me to repost this here today. Want to get to know her more?

Author Bio:

Kelly Blanchard writes medieval fantasy, science fiction, and has published historical fiction under the name Serafia Cross. In addition to this, she maintains a blog which cover numerous topics of writing (description, dialogue, pace of story, timing, fight/battle scenes, working with an artist to create book covers, self promotion, and much more), and she mentors fellow writers in the craft of writing.

Her website to her historical fiction work: www.serafiacross.com


If you're interested in seeing her fantasy stories or reading poem and short stories based off her historical fiction work, you can find her profile here on Wattpad: http://www.wattpad.com/user/Kellannetta

If interested in interacting more with Kelly or are interested in inspiration for your stories and encouragement in your writing, you're welcome to join her group on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/AuthorKellyBlanchard/

Monday, June 15, 2015

Inpirational Music Monday 6-15-15

Before I get into the nitty gritty here, let me explain what Mondays mean at Nightmares and Chocolate. Besides being the start of most white collar work weeks, Mondays here are for music that inspire you to write. Some of the songs that will be featured may be sad, some happy, some odd. I enjoy a wide range of music, and my tastes will be reflected in these blog posts. I’m not a music expert, but I do love music, and abhor silence. Silence is deadly.

Three Days Grace has a permanent place in my playlists, as you may be able to tell by now. Animal I have Become is another of my personal anthems, but for slightly different reasons than the last song, Pain. I’ve read some opinions that the song is about addiction, but most opinions are centered around the beast we become when we allow anger and rage to take us over.

To me, its the rage. I become someone I’m not when I allow my rage to control my actions. Its almost as if I am sitting in the back seat, looking at everything going on around me through a red shade. It happens just like that, though not often.

But this song is also a shifter song. How often is the animalistic side of a person called a beast? Well, in many shifter stories, rage can bring on a quick shift. I write paranormal, so this song often ends up in my novel playlist. Its perfect also for any fight scene, or as a way to connect with an angry antagonist. Listen to the vid, then take a look at the lyrics below.


"Animal I Have Become"

I can't escape this hell
So many times I've tried
But I'm still caged inside
Somebody get me through this nightmare
I can't control myself

So what if you can see the darkest side of me?
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal
(This animal, this animal)

I can't escape myself
(I can't escape myself)
So many times I've lied
(So many times I've lied)
But there's still rage inside
Somebody get me through this nightmare
I can't control myself

So what if you can see the darkest side of me?
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal

Somebody help me through this nightmare
I can't control myself
Somebody wake me from this nightmare
I can't escape this hell

(This animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal, this animal)

So what if you can see the darkest side of me?
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal
(This animal I have become)

Sunday, June 14, 2015

Sunday Recap 6-14-15

Its Sunday! And that means its time for a quick recap of the week.

I hit a massive depression for the past couple weeks. I’m sorry, dear fans, but gathering the will to get out of bed was hard as it is. It happens, and I’m actually forgiving myself for it. Well, not really, because there is nothing to forgive. I have bipolar, I have periods that are up and some that are down. It happens. *grins*
That being said, I’m slowly building myself back up. Its taking work. A great deal of work. But I’m determined to own my bipolar. I will, somehow, find a way to kick this shit in the ass. I’ve taken a writing/editing class, and am doing a mentoring class. It is my hope that these will help me out in both my writing and my life. Time will tell, but I’m feeling better today!
I did get two blogs posted this week. Find them below:

Wednesday Review: http://ow.ly/NZSua
Q&A Saturday: http://ow.ly/OgQS6

I have a short story sitting with a friend right now. She’s going to look it over and help me tighten it up. I’m hoping that I can find a home for it. If I don’t, look for it to be self-pubbed by the holidays.

That’s all for today!

Love and light to all,
Kat